you.
you are perfect.
your.
your writing is perfect.
i.
i love it all.
thank you for everything you write. it takes me back/gives me hope/makes me smile.

it's was used in the wrong sense... and God is capatalized, then you didn't capitalize a few things you missed, it was a bit distracting. then what i liked... it's the description, it gets me mesmorized and addicted to the story... very well-written. i love your style, kepp writing :]

No, not horrible, never horrible. It is a bit different from how you usually write (and not just the fact that the length of it surprised me), but I like it. Maybe something you could continue? Or write a prequel to?

Horrible? No, not horrible.

I really really really really really like this one. At first, I didn't think she was drunk, though. Maybe some people have panic attacks when they're drunk, I guess... hmm...