This is blissfully well-written. Everything is so vivid and pure and just itself - it's like BEING on drugs to read it. I love it, and I can't wait to read more. Your prose is elicit.

There was just one tiny thing that irked me, though, and this is so stupid, I'm sure. Maybe this is just the personal experience of the people I know, but if you've got two horny teenagers taking hard street drugs, they're probably not going to bother with a condom. I'm not saying you should change it, it just kind of took me out of the realism of the story for just a brief moment.

But this is truly fantastic.