Creepy in a soft way. Nothing too intense, but it still leaves you wondering... I like it.

Beautiful writing! This is a very good story.

Whoa that was friggin' awesome!

Beautiful. What's with this guy? He's really intriguing. I'm looking forward to reading more from you!

I like the descriptions. It really brings the story to life. Vampires/bloodsucking creatures are very popular nowadays but I like the way you use it to your advantage and strike out on a path of your own. This is very original.

It is good. Very good. Keep writing. Somehow, it seems to be one of the non-cliché things on here. For that, I commend you.