   Satan's Mistress 2009-02-01 . chapter 1Creepy in a soft way. Nothing too intense, but it still leaves you wondering... I like it. |
 T.M. Calhoun 2008-12-10 . chapter 1Beautiful writing! This is a very good story. |
 Ecaterina Dracula 2008-10-01 . chapter 1Whoa that was friggin' awesome! |
 im.a.werewolf.rawr. 2008-09-28 . chapter 1Beautiful. What's with this guy? He's really intriguing. I'm looking forward to reading more from you! |
 S. M. Saves 2008-09-28 . chapter 1I like the descriptions. It really brings the story to life. Vampires/bloodsucking creatures are very popular nowadays but I like the way you use it to your advantage and strike out on a path of your own. This is very original. |
 Reclusive Darkness 2008-09-28 . chapter 1It is good. Very good. Keep writing. Somehow, it seems to be one of the non-cliché things on here. For that, I commend you. |
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