WOW so this is the BIG Brother! (the fanous story) It gives of a chiiling vibe! Awesome!

Now this is going to be hard to critique. I'm not really sure what you're trying to say other than bowing down (presumably to authority) is mandatory.

Quote: We have control over your every speech.

You sound like some fanatic of communism raving about a global communist utopia and brainwashing everybody.

Quote: Your worst fears will be restrained.

Also I have a problem with your choice of words. You don't restrain your fear because fears aren't urges or temptations. Fear is something you'd obviously want to keep back so there's no need to restrain it.

good work, i love big brother pieces, thank you for sharing

all of that powerful meaning jampacked into a small poem. I always say that short poems can often have the most meaning. Your poem had a nice style an beat, and it makes you think about what the government is prepared to do to its people...
I liked the way you refered to big brother in the poem's title, I like 1984 (:

Oppressive government makes the nation depressive. This goes the same for dangerous crime organisations. No ones save in this world full of injustices. Great work!