My absolute favorite oneshot I have ever read! Usually they are just one steamy sex scene - this had a real (very good) plot, AND the steamy sex (; Adored the characters..think I am in love with Hunter. Also absolutely adores that last scene!
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aaww, so damn cute! i loved the ending xD

Very cute. I think corny i cute, the ending ties it off very nicely. Although I didn't want it to end. In fact, going into more detail would've been fine. The length truely doesn't matter, if it's enjoyable to red, and believe me it was.

hee, this is really funny and awesome! :)

This was really good! I love the last three lines so much. They're hilarious!

Aw that end was too cute!
I loved this. Although I feel a bit bad for Hunter because I feel like Ally didn't really respond in a fluffy/cutesy way enough towards him. Like he's kind of making Hunter feel like he's settling for him or something. Hunter's so sweet he deserves to be told that Ally thinks about him all the time too and stuff.
But otherwise this was super cute and I really loved it :) Great job! The title is cute too, haha! And it fits the story (because of the end) :D
Nice job! *adds to favorites*

Cute story.
Am I very bad when I admit that I like Egans remark when he's caught in the act? Hahah...

There is one typo, after he met his ex on the street and gets back to his new home:
“Do you need help with anything?” I ask, watching as Egan stirs some vegetables in a wok.
I guess you mean Hunter instead of Egan.

O...this was great. =) *favorites* XD

hehe aww i loved this, it was really well written!

So unbelievably adorable :)

Kat

That was really cute! Romantic, but not the sappy kind.

This was...oddly sweet. Ally's a great character; he's cute and funny, but he doesn't overdo it. He's very real.
However, I have a horrible fear of mannequins, so despite the fact that Ally and Hunter are cute together, I probably would have punched him in the face. That was kinda creepy...but it was also sweet, in a way. God, I need to find some synonyms...anyway, this was awesome!

THAT WAS AMAZING!! =D

I laughed so much a this! It's amazing!
FAVS

o man that was both funny and loving! great work!