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Little Miss Whatsherface 2008-11-05 . chapter 6
XD Very awesome job with this chapter. It was funny because we got to read what was going through Miyuu's head the entire time. Ishikawa was squee material here. ^.^ My only thing was that it got a little difficult to tell who was talking. But that's not important, because I was laughing the whole time I was reading this. ^.^ I want more! Be sure to update SOON.
Forgotten-Whispers 2008-10-29 . chapter 6
Wow interesting, I like how he's acting good yet he's secretly bad haha. The story is coming along great, I can't with what you're going to put Miyuu through with that boy. It's probably going be like BAM in your face and the readers are going to be like O.O NO WAY! Anyways keep up with the good work, keep those fingers typing.
Forgotten-Whispers 2008-10-18 . chapter 5
Oh very exciting, I wonder how everything will turn out lol. It seems tense but I bet any girl in her position would be like crap now what haha. I like the whole love and hate situation it really makes everything a lot more interesting. I'm not good at math myself, all my friends practically now that by now haha.
Little Miss Whatsherface 2008-10-11 . chapter 5
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The ending was LOL material. Seriously! I loved how she was stalking him and everyone else was like, "Eh?" because it was so obvious.
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Looks like Miyuu is starting to crumble under the insanity. NO, YOU CAN DO IT MIYUU! And yay for the huge plot twist in this amazingly hilarious story. By the way, I forgot to mention I think you write amazingly well in first person. I SUCK at writing in first person. You, however, have a real talent for it.
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Can't wait for the next chapter! I think I'll read your other story too.
Little Miss Whatsherface 2008-10-11 . chapter 4
Ooh! Miyuu BURNED Ishikawa! XD Aww, poor Miyuu. I shall give her a hug! Her dad hasn't even been introduced yet... but I like him already! XD He sounds like he'll be an amusing character. On to the next chapter!
Forgotten-Whispers 2008-10-07 . chapter 4
OOh interesting touch to the ending, very interesting I didn't know what to think anymore. Yeah some people can do that though typing something or writing something you don't mean to shows up on paper, intersting how the mind works at times. Well I can't wait for chapter 5, my eyes were like this O.O the more I kept reading.
Forgotten-Whispers 2008-10-03 . chapter 3
GOd ending to the chapter, very surprising and unexpected. It's sad all her efforts turned out to be nothing but more work, lol very funny. I hope your exams go well, everyone I know is going through some sort of testing trouble this whole year haha.
Little Miss Whatsherface 2008-10-02 . chapter 3
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I like Jun. He's such an entertaining little brother, how he's a lot smarter than his older sister.
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Wow, Ishikawa is pretty smart too. You can't help but like the guy because of his cleverness, despite him being a jerk to Miyuu.
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Speaking of which, poor Miyuu. She can never seem to catch a break. But at least she's the headstrong, determined heroine. Maybe she'll finally catch Ishikawa off guard? Though that doesn't seem likely to happen any time soon.
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Can't wait for an update!
Forgotten-Whispers 2008-10-01 . chapter 2
Great chapter!! It was very funny in certain parts, I liked how you made Ishikawa so rude like that...it's perfect. Hot guy outside but rude on the other, sweet. I'm definitely curious where this story might lead. I'm working on a story as well but I highly doubt I'll post it anytime soon. I have to think of a very good ending. And I so agree, I tend to despise cheesy romance stories but this is way off the charts of being plain cute! ^O^
Little Miss Whatsherface 2008-09-30 . chapter 2
Oh, wow, Ishikawa is such a jerk. Figures the hot guy is a jerk.
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Miyuu made me laugh in this chapter. A lot. And now she's scheming an evil plan. Woot for evil plans!
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Huh, I have a feeling she won't stay angry at Ishikawa though. Despite the few grammatical errors (like periods being where commas should be) this was a well written chapter. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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Forgotten-Whispers 2008-09-29 . chapter 1
I adored it, I pictured the whole thing, the imagery was great. I imagined Miyuu to be this very cute hyper girl that's confident no matter what, I liked her friends too very good personalities. I picture Mika to be a much tougher character like the girl with attitude. I can't wait to read more so update soon please...^_^!
Little Miss Whatsherface 2008-09-29 . chapter 1
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This is a very entertaining story. And the detail was really good as well. Miyuu is a very amusing character. All ready I like her! I'm keeping an eye on this story. Update soon!
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