Wow. Tiff is a really good friend. I can already see her character coming out beautifully. I also really like the character development of Andrea. Really good story and I cannot wait for more. The only mistake i found was when you said: “And here we go again.” I murmured underneath my breathe. Breathe should be breath. But besides that, Great story!
~RosePetal~

ohh! Gave me chills. Awesome chapter. So powerful, so alluring, so beautiful! Love the story so far!
~RosePetal~

OMG, you right so beautifully, I especially like the last few sentences, they were so awesome that I stopped to read them twice!!
UPDATE please!
Narq.

This is nice... Have you seen "A Beautiful Mind"? the main character also had schizophrenia.
Narq.

so I really like this, I also found a couple grammar mistakes such as

Living in Vermont means there is plenty of trees. My aunt lived far away from the small town, and our home was surrounded by them-you said that she lived "far away"from the small town, it didn't really make much sense

Im also going to offer to beta-read because I really like the story and with a little editing it would be just plain awesome!

This is good so far. Very intriguing. Just caught a couple of grammar and spelling mistakes.

"Living in Vermont means there is plenty of trees" -- should be "are plenty of trees."

"Don't loose yourself" - should be don't lose yourself. But good so far.

I'll beta if you want.