|Reviews for Break Free|
| dragonflydreamer 11/27/08 . chapter 1
[And light capture the darkness.] I really like this line. Very creatively worded.
I also like "unfold" in this first line. It gives the haiku a feeling of . . . erm . . . unfolding ;
[darkness.] should be a comma
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| sTrive 10/28/08 . chapter 1
Nice job and thanks for the review!
| Needa S 10/1/08 . chapter 1
Beautifully done. Write on.
| May Elizabeth 9/30/08 . chapter 1
I love this. Keep it up.