| Reviews for Break Free |
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dragonflydreamer 11/27/08 . chapter 1[And light capture the darkness.] I really like this line. Very creatively worded. I also like "unfold" in this first line. It gives the haiku a feeling of . . . erm . . . unfolding ; [darkness.] should be a comma brought to you by the Roadhouse's Beer Run (link in profile) |
sTrive 10/28/08 . chapter 1Nice job and thanks for the review! |
Needa S 10/1/08 . chapter 1Beautifully done. Write on. |
May Elizabeth 9/30/08 . chapter 1I love this. Keep it up. |