you and everyone else, kiddo. try maybe writing something original.

I really like how you did not say the same thing over and over but you managed to capture and describe the feeling of hurt throughout. "I hurt." "I ache." "I cry." You are able to make the reader feel what you are feeling because when I read your poem I felt like I was hurting too. I also like the layout of your poem. Overall good job, like I always say...the best poems are written when you are just writing out your emotions.