Lovely!! Great imagery and amazing opening line - definitely eye-catchig. I really love this: "Listens to these tangled words and answer back the storm". Great piece.

Maybe you could check out one of my new poems, "star swallower" or "siren song"? I would definitely appreciate your feedback.

delicious.

p.s. thanks for still keeping track of my writing after all this time. i appreciate the feedback :)

~mezzie

This tastes good on the tongue, though I'm having trouble seeing what it was, really, that you meant. I am sure my interpretation of it is far from the truth.

"Letting the rain soak through her outstretched arms"

Lovely as always.

-Anna

and answers back the storm.

I love that.