What can I saw? I totally love this. I've read this before (when I searched 'rockstar' XD) but now I've read it again, and somehow I just fell in love with it. I guess it's just so true, especially the last line.
I'd like to be a "well rounded critique", but this poem is PERFECT, so I couldn't pick any flaws :DD

i like the half poem, half prose format.
lovely.

"over in my radio."... on

I really like the repetition, it works well with the piece. I also like how you put that last line separate, I think putting it with the piece would've been odd. I also like your descriptions, nice job.

PS If you're bored check out the Review Game forum and/or it's Review Marathon (link in my profile). Also, I see you have a deviant art account, you might enjoy the Review Game's Artist-Author Trade topic.

very different, I like it. Good job :)
Faith