Oh gracious. I love the first and last stanzas; very memorable. ;D And it flowed very well. *blush* Although, I'm not much of a rhymer. heh.

-dances.with.sunflowers.

i loved the last two verses because they set the tone and made it seem more than just another love poem. great job

How cool. I like this poem. Anything pertaining to rain has to be cool. I really like the first line. Good job, keep it up.