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Reviews For: The Sacrifice
Xrey 2008-10-11 . chapter 1
My dear ernest, this story was written before the show came out. And Twilight isn't the only vampire story in the world. :)
ernest 2008-10-10 . chapter 5
one advice: we all know what's going to happen, so you had better twist the story.
ernest 2008-10-10 . chapter 4
why does this story remind me of twilight and the shou shu kuang mo show?
ernest 2008-10-10 . chapter 2
lol. shou shu kuang mo ( surgical maniac )
Brit Girl 101 2008-10-07 . chapter 5
are they in high school or uni?
you said lectur at one point but high school at another
Yuukino Uta 2008-10-02 . chapter 4
Nice...
but short...
Anyways, I would just like to thank you for updating!
Yuukino Uta 2008-09-30 . chapter 1
Nice start, vivid image sparker...no other words.
I just think you might want to warn your audience first before reading if you continue this tone...
~Feyerah;D~
ethereal.dance. 2008-09-30 . chapter 1
Your prologue is strong and leaves me in the desire for more. It was a bit horrific though, as the person's desire to create a masterpiece with his scalpel gave me chills. If you were to continue your story in this tone, I think it would be better to put it under the horror category as well. But overall, a very strong and vivid start. Keep up the good work.

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