 Xrey 2008-10-11 . chapter 1 My dear ernest, this story was written before the show came out. And Twilight isn't the only vampire story in the world. :) |
 ernest 2008-10-10 . chapter 5 one advice: we all know what's going to happen, so you had better twist the story. |
 ernest 2008-10-10 . chapter 4 why does this story remind me of twilight and the shou shu kuang mo show? |
 ernest 2008-10-10 . chapter 2 lol. shou shu kuang mo ( surgical maniac ) |
 Brit Girl 101 2008-10-07 . chapter 5are they in high school or uni?
you said lectur at one point but high school at another |
 Yuukino Uta 2008-10-02 . chapter 4Nice...
but short...
Anyways, I would just like to thank you for updating! |
 Yuukino Uta 2008-09-30 . chapter 1Nice start, vivid image sparker...no other words.
I just think you might want to warn your audience first before reading if you continue this tone...
~Feyerah;D~ |
 ethereal.dance. 2008-09-30 . chapter 1Your prologue is strong and leaves me in the desire for more. It was a bit horrific though, as the person's desire to create a masterpiece with his scalpel gave me chills. If you were to continue your story in this tone, I think it would be better to put it under the horror category as well. But overall, a very strong and vivid start. Keep up the good work.
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