 Hyde 2009-09-08 . chapter 2 Awesome! I see Sorco is sorta an **, but he does have a good side. Perhaps he could join the other two? And Meifa's ability is really intriguing, I wonder what that is all about. You must update soon, coz I don't wanna Londo get impaled! |
 Hyde 2009-09-08 . chapter 1 Well, this new tale of yours certainly shows promise... it's different from others, but no in a bad way. Both protagonists seem interesting, granted I don't know much about Meifa at this point. Londo is a good fighter though.
Can't wait to read more! |
 Dude Boy 2009-08-17 . chapter 2Great job on switching between Sorco's bad and good sides! It was a nice twist, that made me first dislike him and then root for him. It's amazing how without going into descritions about feelings you manage to make the reader care about characters none the less.
And Meifa is officially very intriguing.
Hope you'll update soon, coz finishing with such a cliffy... evil! |
 Dude Boy 2009-08-17 . chapter 1You sure write quite a bunch of stories. But this one is quite different from the typical setting. Not that I mind, I actually find this quite interesting. I wonder what sort of battles will you give us this time around.
Seeing Londo vs. Sorco really hooked me up. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Great start! |
 Pat 2009-08-08 . chapter 2 Since one. I see Meifa's got some strange abilities. Can't stop wondering what they are. And Sorco, although an **, overall seems like a good guy. Perhaps he'll be joining the main party? Anyways: what a cliffy! I do hope you'll update soon, coz I can't wait to see what happens next! |
 Pat 2009-08-08 . chapter 1 Finally I got enough time to read this. I was aiming at it for a while, but never got the time. Anyways I really like the beginning, it glues the readers in. So the Earth is no more... certainly not a start I'd expect.
Then we go straight to the battle. I like all the different aliens and Meifa seems like a cool character. So does Londo, but to a lesser degree, at least for the time being.
Overall I'd say it's a great intro and I can't wait to read the next chapter! |
 WhiteWolf Kyoko 2009-07-26 . chapter 2Great chapter! I wonder what's going to happen in the next chapter. :D |
 RagnarokWitness 2009-07-26 . chapter 2Damn, what a cliffy... what did happen to Meifa? I mean she was supposed to take out those collars. Well, there's still hope that she will, but she better hurry, otherwise it's "bye bye Londo".
Great chapter, can't wait for an update! |
 Leivyra 2009-07-24 . chapter 2Cliffhanger much?! Hehe; I hope you update so I can see what happens! |
 Frankie 2009-07-13 . chapter 1 A sci-fi this time, eh? Also not your usual type, but it shows great promise... I like Londo and Sorco already. Meifa... well, too little is known about her yet.
I really liked the intro and the battle was awesome, as usual. Can't wait to see what'll happen next, so update already! |
 RagnarokWitness 2009-05-09 . chapter 1Wow, this seems like a cool story. I'm certainly interested in what happens next, especially since it's not a typical setting for you. A sci-fi tale is the same I'm starting, so I'm looking forward to how yours piece will evolve.
Overall: great work, so update already! XD |
 Ming 2009-04-17 . chapter 1 Nice starter to a story: the prologue certainly gets the readers' attention and later on you keep them with the action. I must admit that this is quite entertaining, even for a sci-fi story, which is the type I usually dislike.
Great job on this chapter and I do hope you'll update soon. |
 Jackyl 2000 2009-04-11 . chapter 1Nice start to a story and from the setting I can tell it's gonna be different from most of your works. I'm sure interested how you're gonna do in a sci-fi setting, but so far you're doing just fine. A lot of action and the characters seem likable. Can't wait to find out what'll happen to LOndo and Meifa and if Sorco's gonna re-appear.
Great job on the first chapter, keep going! |
 WhiteWolf Kyoko 2008-10-07 . chapter 1Interesting story! I can't wait for more. ^_^
Awesome job! |
 Really Annoying One 2008-10-02 . chapter 1Starting off with a big fight, eh? Nice touch. I must say that I was expecting a more one-sided match, so I'm glad Sorco held his own (plus, he seems cool, perhaps he'll become Meifa and Londo's companion later on).
The fight itself was spectacular and I liked it. Plot-wise not much can be said of this piece yet, but knowing you, I'm sure it'll become interesting.
Overall: a job well done. Don't give up on this tale and update ASAP! |