what I enjoyed:
The erratic heartbeats...nice touch. malnutrition leads to electrolyte imbalances which can cause disrythmias.
the depiction of the character's stride for perfection, how she skips eating brownies and so on...very realistic.

anyone that's been anorexic would enjoy and relate.

what i didn't like:

"all her hard work will come true and bear positive results" the bit about hard work coming true isn't quite fiting. hard work 'bears results' or 'shows' or 'isn't in vain' but to say 'hard work will come true'...not so sure about this.

Deep. I've never heard of that kind of phobia but from what I know about anorexia and bullemia it has to be somewhat different. Is this about you? I like the description in the first paragraph too. It's very good.

I like this, despite its depressingness! The format is cool and the end is really good. I like the title, too. =)

Well written.

This is depressing. I love it.
I think it is, too. :)