well, it's too late at the moment (3 AM, to be exact) to read this, but i dropped in to say that i think your title is awesome! :D

nice job :)
update soon

awesome job :)
i love this story so much. i can really connect with losing wieght and then being afraid to gain it back. :)

hmm i wouldn't like the curtains much anymore either. Holly's story really makes me think and imagine- both about her life (which seems so incredibly real) and about mine. while this story is really different to Allison (sorry i can't help but keep mentioning it) it has a similar effect on me. update soon (:

Great! You still don't disapoint me. Update Please!

wow, i come back from holidays and find FIVE new chapters already :) yay. I like this a lot, and the way you let us get to know each of the characters on their own before the story really launches. looking forward to updates which will hopefully come soon=] and best of luck with Allison Wonderland and your WEbook competition.

I'm loving your new story! It has serious potential.

The only thing is that in the first chapter, the boyfriend's name is Jared, and in the fifth one, you've changed it to Josh. Just thought I'd point it out. (:

Keep going! I'll be watching.
romance at shrot notice.

i really liked this chapter, espcically about the moon and stars at the end :)

awwhh. that was really sad. but i really liked the way you wrote it as a letter :)
its amazing

wow. that was intense. nice job :)

Hmm, interesting. More please!

"Holly had her ID card already pulled out of her back pocket..."
Should that be Claire instead of Holly?

So far I like the story, and I really like the idea behind it. I'm a fan of Allison Wonderland and I look forward to reading more of your work. :)

~Nette~

so. i read allison wonderland and i was so in love with that story. it was so amazing. and i already love the beginging of thise :)
nice job and update wicked soon :)

Amazing beginning. I just want to say, that this is the first time I've ever read a summary for a story and IMMEDIATELY jumped to read it. I love the plot idea. It really hits home for me and, I'm sure, for a lot of other girls.

I can't wait to read more and good luck with Allison Wonderland this October. I'll be sure to vote! :)

Ooh, a new story. Looks good, can't wait to read more of this!