God..she's an idiot. She shouldn't have gone back. Bob's abusive you idiot!! Gah...such a stupid girl. Anyway, good chapter! :P

Great chapter. Love it. I think Bob is so cute with her, the end was a bit steamy for my liking but I love the two of them.

Love it! Bob is so sweet and protective. I love him!! I can't wait to read more! You need to update sooner this time!

Nice start. I did catch a few grammar errors, but they weren't enough to be distracting. The flow is nice, and you've captured the scene of a pool nicely.

However, some background on Lor and Bob would be great. I don't even need a whole lot, but it does seem a little random that Bob pops out of nowhere and starts rubbing her feet, you know? And the kissing, to the "I'm too old!" A little more build-up would be nice. That's really I have to say though. It was well written and I'm loving the personality of the story.

Keep it up!

Tahtah!
Callyne

Hey. This is really good! Im heaps intrigued as to where your going to take it from here. Can't wait for more. update soon!

I love it! I can't wait to read more!
You need to update really really soon. like tomorrow.

Love it!! It was to cute. Bob soundsd like a cutie. can't wait to read more!

Love it. :D

Wow; i really like this.
Yay! First Reviewer=D