i hate you, how could you do that i will never read a book of yours again if they have endings like that please change it!

are you delusional?

Ion is the boy from the park right? The one that died instead of Anika?

I am dying to know where she has seen Ion before and what he has to do with anything, when will that be revealed?!

it would really be helpfull if you could explain the prophecy im a little lost

Slight confusion technically, I'd like to point out.

You say that Anika "died" at age fourteen-ish. How is she suddenly 12??

Also, she can't BE 12 cause Ion, same age, died at age 11 which was 4 years ago. o__O

Just thought I'd point it out.

- HT

Dang login page I forgot to enter my email!! ><

Anyway nice chappy, I enjoyed it, I liked the shoving into the basement to save him part, thats kinda like something I'm working on... I'm posting it today. ^_^ Anyway see ya! I really enjoyed it, fun time ^_^

YES.
THIS IS WIN.

what.the.HELL.

you fucking killed her, and killed kale again.

what.the.FUCK

wow. this is such a powerful beginning.
haha just wanted to drop that note before i continue reading~
great job!

WA! that's so sad! Ion wanted to go and wouldn't be whole without her! Now she's dead! What'll happen to Ion? I need to know!

i loved this chapter! it was really good! are there going to be more?

You. Are. A. Cruel. Bitch.

If your cellphone had an actual inbox, I'd send a ranting voicemail about how much of a bitch you are.

D: I do not like you. And yet I love you. Rawrg! You make me want to strangle something - seriously.

I have saved all the chapters to my own computer. You now have a folder all your own on my laptop. Be thankful - it takes more than just being a friend to go up there...in there...whatever.

The ending was very well done - there are some spelling mistakes, but that's expected, seeing as you haven't gotten it to the editing process. I definately liked that last time.

How much do you want to bet that Tama will rejoice?

Signed,

Melissa Felton

Though this not something I would normally read, it is very well written.

no! ion!

i can't believe you locked him in the basement.he'll be twice as likely to do something stupid and get himself killed.

"Oh, Peter, why am I so stupid?" Anika asked, flipping through tha pages of the large novel.

"Oh, I don't know, Anika, why?" Peter asked, he held a book open, trying to ignore the ignoramus.

"Well, that's why I'm asking you, because you're so much smarter than me, well, it seems like anyone is nowadays, but still, that's beside the point." Anika said.

"No, that is the point," Peter said, "I mean, seriously? look at you. You're like, the dumbest person in our book. Our story, and you think you're all that."

"Well, it's my own tendency to be an attention whore, Peter." Anika reminded.

"Oh, how very true, how very, and sadly true. Well- For you that is. No one else likes you. Tamaki-san says that she is very pelased that you abandoned Ion in your time of need and when to buttrape Vincent with all of your own butthurt. Is that correct?" Peter asked, setting the book down momentarily.

"Yes, I think that would be a correct way to say it." Anika said with a nod. "Poor Vincent...now that I think about it all, I really bothered him too, I bet."

"What, witha ll your snot and crybabyness?" Peter asked. "Not to mention all the drool you left on his shirt."

Anika nodded. "Yes, I do seem to recall that. Silly me. His shirt must've been soaked...I wish I could Vincent surprise Buttsecks." She said, staring dreamily into the volume.

"You wish that with everyone." Peter corrected. "Right?"

Anika thought. "Oh, well, yeah...I kind of do...especially Amber. She...ugh! If I were a man, I'd so give it to her hard!" Anika exclaimed.

"Whoa, calm down. I wouldn't want you cream yourself in here...the books would get damaged." Peter said, taking the time to lift several books within his reach. "You know how much that would upset me." He said to her in a matter-of-fact voice.

"Oh, yes, I understand. Sorry. Just thinking about her is...wow...how incestuous..." She cackled to herself. "It's...like a slurpee...I just love to slurp...pee...M!" She said, tapping the book against her legs.

"Anika, please, calm down. This is unecessary behaivor. Please refrain yourself from doing anything unruly, and in other words, completely disgusting that would shatter any image I have left of you...if there even is one." Peter thought. "Well, no not really...I have no image of you, but still, please don't."

"Right, I won't do that, because Peter thinks that is really gross." Anika repeated.

"Yes, freaking nasty." Peter said with a nod.

"Um, Peter...?" Anika asked.

"Yes, Dimwit?"

"Well, when I die...since it's so obvious that I'm going to be dying in the near future..." She quieted.

"Yes?"

"Well, when I die, do you think that anyone of your nice friends will miss me?" She wondered.

"Not in the least, my dear...uh...erm...Anika." Peter said, his face lit up by a brilliantly cute smile. "Why do you ask?" He asked in fake curiosity, as he now tried with his most valiant effort to ignore the idiot by cramming his face in a book.

FAIL.

Anika went off, saying how annoying she thought she was.

Peter had FAILED in his attempt ignore Anika. Hewanted to cry himself to sleep.

"...but, like, you know, like...that's good, right?" Anika asked.

"Most definately." Peter said, flashing another smile. He lifted the book to hide his face, hoping that the idiot whom accompanied him would try, but most likely FAIL, to take notice.

FAIL...NUMBER TWO.

"That's lovely to hear. I'm so glad." Anikas miled to herself. "Now I won't ahve any regrets about the time when I die." She said in a happy tone.

Peter sighed. "You know, I really don't know what I saw in you."

"Not many people do. They tend to question how they even got involved with an idiot such as myself."

"That's what I'm wondering, Anika." Peter replied curtly, before closing his book and placing it on a nearby desk.

It was quiet for quite some time, as Anika allowed Peter to ponder what mistake he could've made which made him HAVE to get involved with Anika.

He tapped his fingers impatiently on the arm of the chair he was on. 'Why me?' Peter thought. 'Why the hell am I even helping this idiot?' He glared. 'She's even holding the book UP. SIDE. DOWN!' Peter roared in his head. 'That's probably why you can't understand half of what it says, because you can't read upsidedown, let alone rightsideup, or maybe you don't even know HOW to read, you dolt.' Peter closed his eyes, and rubbed his temples in frustration.

"I'm here!" A cheery voice called.

Peter sighed. "Savior- I mean, hey, Ion. What brings you here? The lovely thought of rescuine me?" Peter asked.

Ion nodded. "I could sense your pain all the way through the...well, let's just say you feel very tense in here." He smiled.

"Oh, do I?" Peter asked, his eyebrow twitching.

"Just a little." Ion said as he looked around and noticed Anika. "Oh, hi. I didn't see you there...I wish I hadn't...but...um-"

"Peter, I still can't understand this book! Anika complained.

"Turn it the hell around, you idiot!" Peter yelled, finally snapping. "Jezuz, fricking christ, you idiot!" He said with a sigh. "What in all that is holy is wrong with you!?" He asked.

"I'm just dumb?"

"Bingo!" Ion called out.

"I wish I could just...kill her." Peter said, letting his shoulders sag.

"All in due time, good friend, all in good time." Ion said, patting Peter's shoulder.

"I know...I know..." Peter said.

Anika took the time to turn the book into a proper reading position. "Oh, what do you know!" She exclaimed.

"You figured that you were holding the book wrong?" Peter asked.

"No," She laughed. "I never actually learned how to read properly!" She said with an idiotic smile.

Peter stared. "You..." He glared. "Are you-" He chraged for her. "Let me kill her! Someone this stupid should die!" He yelled.

"Peter!" Ion called, catching Peter. "Come on, just last a little bit longer!"

Peter wanted to ring Anika's neck.

"Yeah, silly Peter!" Anika said, chucking the book behind her back, "I'm going to be killed by someone else!" She said. "Hee-hee!"

"I'm so glad this is all coming to an end..." Peter said as he allowed Ion to set him back into his seat.

Ion smiled. "Now, excuse me. I have to go shoot the next scene where that stupid bitch is actually made to look cool by trapping me in some damn basement." Ion said.

"Oh, that sucks." Peter said.

Ion sighed. "Yeah, it's so she can try to look cool." Ion explained.

"Oh, have fun with that. I'll bring some cookies and juice later then." Peter said.

"Okay, thanks." Ion said, pounding fists with Peter.

"Later then." Peter said, waving Ion off.

"This'll be so much fun...and I have to act like I actually care." Ion said.

"Just act,a nd all the while, on the inside, you hate her." Peter gave adivce. NICE.

"Will do, because this idiot..." Ion laughed. "This is going to be awesome!" He cheered.

"Bye, buddy!" Peter called as Ion left.

Anika sat on the floor with a stupid smile plastered on her face.

"I wish you would die." Peter said.

"It's coming." Anika said quietly.

"Not fast enough." A voice said apart from Peter's.

Anika turned to it. "Whoa, who are you?"

"Someone who hates you." The brown-haired vampire said.

"Matt. Nice Cameo." Peter said, bowing his head.

"Thank you." Matt said, bowing his head back. "I've been following along closely, and I can honestly say that I really don't like you, woman." Matt said, pointing at Anika.

"It's coming buddy, it's coming." Peter said.

Matt ran a hand through his dark locks. "Finally, because I seriously am getting annoyed like no other. I'm going crazy. Like, poor Ion, man."

Peter nodded. "I know, I feel your pain. Poor guy. He's really doing his best not shoot himself though."

"He's brave, following along with all this. How much is he getting paid?" Matt asked.

"More than any of us. He's a swindler, that boy is."