 righthere431 2009-11-11 . chapter 32Ah I love it! |
 LolliLee 2009-10-10 . chapter 32It's SugarCraziiness. Yeah, I have a second account (which I made just now just in case you don't read anonymous reviews...and because I didn't like my old account anyways). The freaking review thing cut me off again. Gawsh. Just wanted to finish what I wrote, which I think I can remember...
Oh yeah. I said that pressing the button to add your story to my favorites wasn't stupid, just that pressing it while I was still reviewing was stupid. Oh, I also said I really love this story...and...I listened to the songs, and I already have a few on my iPod...I'm glad I stuck with this story...I'm really sad that it's over, but I'm yay-ing that you're making a third installment...and I think that's all. Yup. So bye!
--Leanne |
 SugarCraziiness 2009-10-10 . chapter 33Reading the author's note. I can't believe it's over either. And that I reviewed all the chapters (that's gotta be a record, I never review anything). Haha, no angry fans here! I like Rhys better than Edward too. But that's probably because Edward sparkles, and his descriptions are way exaggerated by Bella. I'm glad I stuck with this story, by the way. Where would I be without reading? Nowhere probably. I'll be waiting for the third installment! I don't think I can review every chapter, since that really took a lot out of me--I'm a freakishly lazy person (I'm glad I reviewed, nonetheless)--but I will review every once in a while just to show you I'm still here!
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 SugarCraziiness 2009-10-10 . chapter 32OH MY GOSH! I'm so angry (not at you, myself)! I had a freaking long review, explaining how much I really loved the chapter and how I was sorry I didn't review sooner because for some reason I either didn't get the alert or didn't notice it (I opened this story because I was sad it'd been so long only to realize it'd been a month since you updated! A MONTH! I should get a time-out, I feel so guilty). Anyway, I (very stupidly) pressed the "add story to favorites" button and the review I'd written just disappeared. And, needless to say, I smacked myself on the forehead. Hard. Well, I can't remember what I wrote, but I do remember saying that I loved that last ending kiss. This story is |
 samora 2009-10-01 . chapter 32i liked this story and i love ariella shes crazy
it had it all drama heartbreak humour its a pretty good story
alex pettyfer is suprisingly who i imagined for rhys
and go boy is fernando torres a hottie go liverpool.
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 righthere431 2009-09-24 . chapter 31Great chapter!! Very intense. |
 RoseBriar32192 2009-09-09 . chapter 33*Tear* *tear* IT'S REALLY OVER! NO! Ok well, I'd just like to say, that I also read AND write for those same resons, I know selfish, right? Hopefully, I'll soon begin to wrtie for other people too. I guess I'm starting to do that a little because I LOVE reviews. Anyway, I have to go but I wish you luck on writing the first chapter of your new book! BYE! - RoseBriar |
 PotoPerson 2009-09-08 . chapter 33Aw, that makes me feel cozy inside:)
It has given me a lot of laughter and giggles and makes my day when I find out there's another chapter. I'm depressed for whatever reason, I hop on the computer and "YAY! JUST FOR A THRILL!".
I do in fact reference the Slip up Series when talking to my step sister somtimes. I can't wait to see what happens when you've got Claret being paired with someone! (NOt to mention Ariella AND Amelie around.)
(you know what I'm going to say) Keep on writing!;D |
 SparklingStar25 2009-09-08 . chapter 32That was soo Cute!
An amazing chapter, really!!
i cant believe its over though!! :(
well..Cant wait for the sequel either..lol!! |
 RoseBriar32192 2009-09-07 . chapter 32Ok, this was AMAZING! I wish I could write a longer review, but I can't. I nearly cried when it was over. Ok, well, BYE! - RoseBriar
P.S. I'm SO sad this is over :( |
 enndee 2009-09-07 . chapter 32 This chapter was heartbreaking but beautiful and happy.. you truly are a talented writer :) I am glad you ended it this way, this chapter is very emotional and always kept me at the edge of the seat. I don't know what to say, it's sad but happy. I'm sad that the story is over but happy that Melly and Rhys got the ending they deserved :) |
 candlekitty 2009-09-07 . chapter 32I'm actually clicking on the review button before reading the chapter because you mentioned SJ. Zomg, you can claim Dong Hae and I'm taking EunHyuk and YeSung. (: Ok, I'm going to read the chapter now, might as well read and comment at the same time.
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I'm embarrassed to say that I forgot who Heath is. ._. (I'LL GO BACK AND READ THE PREVIOUS CHAPTERS!) But it's pretty heartwrenching so far.
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LOL Conversation about the kids was very cute.
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WHOOTS IT'S A HAPPY ENDING, THANK GOODNESS, OH GOSH. For a brief moment there I thought you were going to break all your readers' hearts. T^T Was practically on the edge of my seat. You'd be glad to know I had a sudden epiphany and remembered who Heath is. Hahaha, I love this story and once more (if I even said it before...) I think you're an awesome writer with an even awesomer ability to portray characters. (: Good job, and I can't wait for the third installment! |
 Midnight Horizons 2009-09-06 . chapter 32can't believe this is already over. i really loved it, the ending especially. and i think Claret and Axel's story would be really interesting... :) good luck :) |
 Jasmini 2009-09-06 . chapter 32lmao glad to hear we helped you improve your typing skills |
 silent reader 2009-09-06 . chapter 30 you should so write choice 3!! it would be cool to see how that works out! |