quite a strong sequel you've got here. It was very believable and real. I find Simon really endearing in this sequel and sometimes forget that Holm is only graduating high school. He sounds so mature. Keep writing!!

I have a hard love for this/stuffyouwrite. The hard love that comes from reading a lot of bad!slash and then, wow! reading something good. Something *awesome*. This is where you come in...

great non-supernatural relationship story!

i can't wait to see how holm's parents react :D!

Aw, I really like this story. The characters were actually REAL and BELIEVABLE! It was quite awesome.

Wow its been so long since I saw an email in my inbox to say there was a new story or chapter from you.

I like Holm and Simon, its not the usual mushy romance. I'm really glad your back with this and seriously continue Christian Faith and Pretty shade of grey. They are both good and I want them to continue.

i like Christian Faith..i think you can do better but i like that one!..dont hate it~~..i like this one too.. also the prequel of this one but i didnt review because i forgot ..sorry~~..
but i hope you do a sex scene for Holm and Simon..i love when they are together..hope you add more story and update most of you wip story~..later~

nice continuation

: )

DH

I really enjoyed it. There are points in time where the whole 'sex scene' thing gets old, but I think you've really added more depth to a situation that is normall just about a good fuck. Kudos on your awesome work, and I hope you keep writing.