I think this is good. I like the way it all kind of flows, and you can see the pain behind the words.

I really like this. I can so relate.

The second to last line seemed a bit long, which made it a bit out of place.

I like the flow of emotions here, from friendship, to love, to leaving to sadness, it's a very relateable progression. The whole piece is nice because of how relateable it is, even if you can't relate to all of it, you can definitely relate to some aspect of it, which is nice.

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Omg this absolutly amazing! I so love this!

Oh, I can relate so much. I hope you're getting along too.. I still am trying.

Very good poem.