hi! I like this story! Only one thing... you keep using names from Avatar instead of the names you already have, like Alex is suddenly Katara and Derek is suddenly Zuko and I even saw Toph in there! Oh well, still LOVE the story! XD
Grtz Silencia
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Nice except dis organized... the parts are hard to follow, toon says it to. constuructive fee back...HIRE AND EDITOR >:o