|Reviews for Revive Me, Darling Love|
| Darksied 10/9/08 . chapter 1
I am going to agree with isca, that is fantastimoto... :P
| colorful 10/4/08 . chapter 1
perfect. i love poems that rhyme, and this one's perfect.
| Isca 10/4/08 . chapter 1
I loved the repetition of 'oh fleeting modest heartbeat.' It's such a beautiful line! I think I liked the third stanza the best because of the Ahprodite allusion. Great work! :D