"like a cold rain, I'll be sad.. Well,"... the word sad was so blah here. I know you know better words. Also the line break seemed weird line break

"it's impossible to catch a rain(tear)drop."... I really liked that parenthesis thing. It was a really nice touch.

It's a very bittersweet piece. You describe your emotions well. nice job.

This is awsome! Very sad but I can so relate. Awsome Job!

XKristie MarieX

Another very good piece. I enjoyed reading this because of the emotion present. I also like the repetition, nice work.

Wieder ein sehr melodisches Gedicht, das mich an ein Lied erinnert, schon durch die einfache Wörter und die eingängigen Wiederholungen.

I really loved this. Keep up the excellent work. Peace.

This is very well written and it relates to me in many forms. I really wish I could describe the way this evoked old emotions and feelings for me that I still have and I know I will always carry. Well done.

"It'll fall someday, like a cold rain." That line really captivated me. It's so beautiful and sad, and the imagery is amazing! :)

"I've dreamt of you." That line has a lovely profound quality to it.

"I don't want to live without you." AWW! *Tear* So beautiful!

Oh. :( I feel so sorry for the guy the speaker's talking about. It hurts when you get shot down all the time and then the perfect person is right in front of you...

*Thumbs up* Chat later. -Qzie

this is great!