Wow, great poem. I liked how you even had some end rhymes too. It's indeed very sad. You conveyed your emotions very well and it showed in the poem.

Whoa. That was deep and, like you know, I never cry and I did cry. I feel so sorry for you, Minyonka! It makes me think of my own dad...

But all in all, it was deep, sad, yet great. No critcism is needed and if no one cried while reading this...

Those heartless b!stards.