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Trish J 2008-10-05 . chapter 1
... TRIPPY. Man, I should cut back on that sugar. Your words were kind of floating around the screen like... Wingless butterflies... On speed.
You're good at what you do, there's no denying. But maybe, I don't know; your elucidation needs to be a little more... Lucid. Or maybe it's just me. Me and my SUGAR.
Anyway, Saudi, keep it up. Like a slutty friend, your writing's always good for a random (mind)screw.
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