At first, I thought that the main character was colour blind. I like how the story kept building on the idea of the feeling of the colour blue. And it's an interesting observation that people always seem to love blue eyes and that people seem to favour blue. I never noticed that.

I love the concept you were going for with the wind and the sky in the third chapter. However, I thought that if you focused more on the feeling of blue rather than simply explaining it to Claire that the image would be more understandable to her--like making the intangible, blue, tangible, like the feeling of wind.

I adore the ending. Love is blue. I like the connection there.

Well done!

This was a really nice first chapter! I really liked the reflective tone the text had, giving it such a nice feeling that I was really inside the person's head!
Great job!
The Reverse Edge Blade