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Reviews For: Letting Myself Go
WhiteLightningfromSwiftRiver 2008-10-29 . chapter 1
Wow, that was very well written.
Fractured Illusion 2008-10-18 . chapter 1
"as a though comes to mind."
*thought

"I dive face first into the feeling,
letting it completely silence me."
This was my favorite stanza because it was creative :)

Good work, keep it up!

- Frac, from the Review marathon (link in profile)
PsychoCola 2008-10-05 . chapter 1
Good poem. It really captures what it's like to... well, read a poem. The last line sounds awkward though.
Ernest Bloom 2008-10-05 . chapter 1
nice (a little long?).

I smile to myself
as a thoughT comes to mind.
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