WOW. This is one incredible piece. The words you use and the emotions you create with your words are just phenomenal.

Excellent work.

I would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my work! It would really mean a lot.

"The underbelly of an Angel..." I can't get over that line...it's so beautiful :D!

"A blackhole sipping at the edges of his aura." The imagery here is PHENOMENAL!

Good gracious. Your writing is fantastic. I can't handle it :P. Keep writing, please. You're amazing.

-Isca

So lovely and tragic. It feels relevant.

I'd also like to say, I always love your way with words.

this is really, really very good. it is very close in content and theme to something i posted recently myself (vulpecula). very good job.

this is completely and absolutely beautiful. i'm enamored by it, irrevocably shaken. god, my god, the imagery. i could live off of that alone. its so pretty. good job, good job.