|Reviews for wreck|
| Time To Change 10/19/08 . chapter 1
I love how you managed to keep the rhythm throughout.
and the italics in "you only meant the world to me" were awesome.
| Isca 10/6/08 . chapter 1
"Watch as my dignity fades." Beautiful line!
"You're smoke in the wind. Fragile." Brilliant metaphor!
I liked the last line too. It was almost...peaceful :)
| Eve's Deception 10/6/08 . chapter 1
"I'll take your broken memory
in stride and watch as my dig-
nity fades with the night. you
only meant the world to me."
wow this is absolutely beautiful. concise, perfection- so easily flowing and rhythmic. it struck me the most and its by far the most powerful stanza you have. the line breaks are incrediable, making it all just smooth and even when the lines fall onto the next. wonderful.