Wow. This is so heartbreaking and honest. Love the tiny details that make this real and original, like being terrified of telephones and acoustic guitars, the purple and green stars, the white lines spelling out the cat's name. Great work. Keep writing! :)

Maybe I love your writing just because of how much I can relate to it.

My boyfriend and I became serious in February, and started having problems in August.

And he's a foot taller than me.

Crazy.

I keep reading this and not knowing how to review.

I think it's your best.

So vivid, so telling.

I'm scared of telephones, too.

Sad, but beautiful.

I want to know more.

Especially about the last line, I don't really get that no matter how hard I try. :O Mind an explanation? If it's too sensitive of a subject I understand.

I understand all too well.

-LoL

I like it. Very pretty.

Annie