I usually leave elaborate, nitpicky reviews, but I found myself kinda unable to do that with this poem. Maybe that's a factor of it being too late at night for me to think, but I can't really offer any suggestions for improvement.

Instead, all I can say is that this was really pretty.

Thank you for writing it.

-SC

A very sweet poetry yet I find it rather sad...I especially adore the last lines.

Oh, wow! There's a certain gorgeous, dreamlike poetic beauty weaved through your words. I loathe to pick out my favourite stanza, because really they all deserve to be mentioned, but there's just something about the second one that made me re-read it three times before I moved on to the third. This is definitely going on my Favourites.

Interesting. It's a bit sad, and a bit vague, and the purpose is the simple purpose of most poetry, which is to be. I liked the first three lines of the last paragraph. Good job.