I really like this, and I know someone who would love it. I think I'll be showing this to her, because it's a bit brilliant, if you ask me :)

I like this piece because it's so true people do judge, it's part of human nature. The ending was also interesting because I kind of expected it to be that you were married young or something because honestly I know in all fairness I understand accidentally pregnancies more than planned ones at a young age, but maybe that's just me.

Anyhow, I likes the concept, it made a good point very well.

PS If you're bored check out the Review Game forum and/or it's Review Marathon (link in my profile).

AMEN! Good poem!! Love it adding it to favs. awsome job. i'm happy for you. best of luck to you!


XKristie MarieX

Love it, just like basically everything you write! I adore the ending! Great job!