Great Job I really liked it. I think tha it was well written... and I'm not really partal to mxm but I just like smut so...

But good job

Ah! What a lovely story! I find it so sweet that Ajay finally realised that his heart and body were really with someone else instead of his friend. I think I would have been rather depressed if he slept with Jayce, only to keep dreaming of the friend he couldn't have.
Yet another delicious lemon coupled with a sweet, tender story. This is definitely going to my favorites! I look forward to reading more original stories from you, my dear.

Red

Okay, this was a good fic and I know that not giving 'best friend' a name was like symbolic and all, but it was also f--king annoying. I liked the concept, though.

I thought it was a pretty good story, could use more detail on the characters if you're looking to expand. Expansion is good, trust me.

I reckon it's pretty good... i liked "That blindfold had made everything blindingly clear for Ajay." it was a really good point.
Narq.
P.S. come and take a look at my story?