A short, but very exiting chapter! I will continue to read.

interesting. This is such a short chapter and yet I think every move the character makes is being described. LOL. Beautiful. The chasing part, I could picture it very well. This is great. Write more, so that I could read something. :)

Wow! The description is great! yeah another description issue, I wish that I could write like you. LOL but anyway, I love how you described the happenings very clearly. I enjoyed reading this chapter one already. And I wonder what will happen next. :) nice chappie!

What an interesting beginning! I like the changing view points.
I hope you will continue the story.

Wow. This is a really good begining for a story. It seems to have a lot of potential, and I'll definitely be following it :D