This is really good it gets like the truth about alot of stuff

Emo indeed, but very well articulated. I love the rhyming; it seems very natural. I really like the lines, "There is no serpent staff/To save me before I die," it just works so well.

0.0 i frickin love you, you know that? i swear youre pulling thoughts out of MY head and writing about them. iswear!

"There is no serpent staff to save me when I die." Is this an allusion to the biblical story of Moses? If so, it added great depth to the poem. :)

this is really good. i liked the ending. it is a very sad poem...

i liked the lines,

"I giggle and I laugh

When inside I really cry"

because i can relate to that feeling

this was good i liked it. keep it up

Me like. Very good for spur of the moment. Keep writing.