|Reviews for All Because of You|
| Zoeybird101 4/2/10 . chapter 1
This is really good it gets like the truth about alot of stuff
| 403 Forbidden 8/20/09 . chapter 1
Emo indeed, but very well articulated. I love the rhyming; it seems very natural. I really like the lines, "There is no serpent staff/To save me before I die," it just works so well.
| jAsMiNeLoVeStWiLiGhT 6/26/09 . chapter 1
0.0 i frickin love you, you know that? i swear youre pulling thoughts out of MY head and writing about them. iswear!
| Isca 3/7/09 . chapter 1
"There is no serpent staff to save me when I die." Is this an allusion to the biblical story of Moses? If so, it added great depth to the poem. :)
| Little girl Big world 11/22/08 . chapter 1
this is really good. i liked the ending. it is a very sad poem...
i liked the lines,
"I giggle and I laugh
When inside I really cry"
because i can relate to that feeling
this was good i liked it. keep it up
| View from the Windowsill 10/8/08 . chapter 1
Me like. Very good for spur of the moment. Keep writing.