whoah! first she's called Sophronia then Elena...
i wonder what wil happen next
i can't tell who she's most likely to end up with..
so many guys!
this is pretty good, keep it up!
and please update soon!
thank you..

very intresting story and i can't wait for chapter 14

This is good, I really like what you have so far. Just try to watch your spelling and grammer a bit more closely. Other than that, I loved it!! Keep writing this story. It's awesome!! Can't wait to find out what happens next!

Lich Queen