sooooooo good

I loved the story, but I'm going to say this, you are one messed up person to leave all of your fans HANGING for five freaking years. I know people have lives but how can you start so many other stories when you NEED to finish this? I can't believe i stayed up all night hooked on this freaking book just to be left sucked dry. Yes this is one angry fan of yours and I refuse to read any other book of yours until you start the sequel.

Okay so this story was the best! i know this is from three years ago but i hope you get this review. i abosolutlely loved it espicially how you made Eben a little curvy and round then the usually six-packed guys, and the size one guys. And i fell head over heels with Sebastian, i love how controlling and comanding he was. Im on ch.5 of War Cry now and im loving that to. Best story i've read in a while

Freaking amazing! Off to read the sequel now!

I really enjoyed your story. I think what I loved most was your characters, how you portrayed them with all their flaws and insecurities. And of course how their relationship progressed, smoothly and without being rushed. Your writing style was also full of win, I loved how detailed it was. So, it was overall a very good read and I can't wait for the sequel. Keep up the good work!

I have a WTF, but you said there'e a sequel so it's all good. ;)

Rec'd this for the slash pile over at livejournal )

NOOOO! IT CAN'T END THERE! oh well. lucky for me, i do recall seeing the sequel up and running :) this was an amazing story and i enjoyed every bit of it. i especially like how the main isn't stick thin. that's the usual for a main and i like how you've changed that. and i love trying to work out that riddle. so far I'm guessing that Eben and the prince are twins though you've probably already had those guesses. once again, amazing job!

I will have you know that this chapter damn near made me cry.

isn't the theme beauty and the beast?

oh, love how you made the kid 'portly'. it makes the story different from all the other slave trade stories where the slave kid is a skinny, pale, beautiful boy with fair skin and all that jazz.

Never read a story about an important character that's fat..

Sad :'(

Squee! Finally that 3 magic words!

:) argh Sebastian Sebastian

Amusing! This chapter is amusing.