I like the format. It goes direct to the essentiel.

The last verse is quite dark. Not that I mind, I actually find it cool.

"and your both left holding limbs."... you're

I like the formatting with apart, it's interesting and fits really well. I'm not sure what I think about the piece though. I like the two words one being italicized, it looks nice on the page and it's unique. However you do antonyms, similar, same, antonyms, similar, antonyms, antonyms, not sure, same, same. I wish it was consistent in some way. I do like the Help Hope and Safe? Safe. Those were nice.

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I like this. The formatting really helped with the idea of the fissure. Also, I liked how the words were sometimes opposites but also related and even the same words. I can feel the conflict.

omg dude, i like this... so Ellen Hopkins. too bad it didn't format the way it was supposed to. And what's with ppl and the lack of reviews?!i like the

doubt. Faith? part. makes u think.