Wonderful! I do enjoy poems such as this. It really makes me happy to read it. Keep writing stories and poems like this one, and don't stray on the path of sin.

This was so good I really liked the part that said "I've lived too long Just for myself It's time to Live for someone else". i think most if not all christians have felt like that.

but i was wondering if when you put " I give you permission to ruin our lives" did you mean "I give you permission to run our lives"?