 muted velvet 2008-10-09 . chapter 1I liked it, but don't you think it's moving way too fast? The earliest first-kiss I've ever read was from Louisa, Chapter Three-Four (or was it Two-Three) of TCC.
The prose it clean, and the grammar is actually pretty good. (I'm a grammar Nazi--not the real thing, but--couldn't you tell?) And I just moved from my Small Town to the Big City. Not city, really, but Ginormous Town (with a really bad YA Section in the library), so I can relate to Maddie.
Keep it up,
Acantha |