Was this some strange mix betwene kill bill and fight club, yes, yes I think it was. Anyway, great job with the emotion in this one, raw, i loved it. I also loved the line "the scent of thick vanilla that always pleasantly disguised that it was killing you from the inside" that was just poetic! good job!

I want a roomate like that.
Nice Story.

That... was really... interesting. umm.

I really like the style in which you described his long list of fears. That's one freaky dorm mate though. eheh.

I gotta say, this creeped me out a bit, but I assure you it was in a good way. Great job!

o man..i love this..absolutely love it.. it made me laugh my butt off for like 7 minutes strait..wow. and when the guy got out..and looked at jason and went "fucker" that was hilarious. i absolutely love this...its one of the best short stories i've ever read. its just so awesome; i liked it alot.

great story..
-E

we! i really liked it! Both of them are freaks! and soo cute together.

the whole burying alive thing is an original just to make him appreciate life. wow! that's so toe-tuh-lee cool. great job!!

I have to say Aiden must be a much better man than myself. Being buried alive, especially by a close friend, would not end in forgiveness, but in death. For the one that buried me, at least.
Great story!

I remember reading this but I don't remember the ending. Quite unexpected 0.0

I read this the other day so my review won't be great [;)], but I remember I was really impressed by your writing style. After going through some of your other stuff it looks like you've matured quite a bit in that respect, or that you tried extra hard to mix it up on this one. Written well, and especially good considering I really don't like most horror. (Even though it wasn't horror-y. That's what I liked, the undertone of horror without it being overwhelming.)


Which is weird, because my family thinks I'm weird for how excited I get at horror movies.

Anyway! I really loved the underlying message, good one :) It's incredibly, incredibly original and well-thought-out. It comes across very clearly and the way it's revealed to us bit by bit as he claws his way to freedom is really interesting, and freeing. Well done.

Jason's a badass. I love him.
Good job on this one.

I think I would rate this one up there with A Perfect Day for Bananafish. I wouldn't call it horror, although it did kind of blow my mind. It's something your creative writing teacher would probably like, but I'm not him so I don't know for a fact. Anyway, I like this one lots.

That was amazing. Very very strange, but an excellent plot line that I was heavily drawn into reading, well done.
JM

That's weird, but certainly beautifully written. Nice work!

While this did "freak me out" a bit, the light ending made it work out quite well :)

:)

I don't quite understand the 'Get you up again." Part.

But I liked it. Reminded me of Poe.