omg wats gonna happen is her mom gonna get arrested omg
does she die

I liked it! A lot! It's a shame the chapters aren't a bit longer, but I know how difficult it is to write long chapters.. And as long they are liek this I don't really mind. As long as you update frequently anyway ;)

Oh boy. wow, so that was just a little surprising :) ok, so yeah, i wonder what made her mom suddenly want to bring her home? i guess i'll just have to wait and see! :) update soon!

your welcome! anyway nice chapter especially the part where anna attacked marissa nice i like it. UPDATE SOON!

OH WOW! that was totally awesome!! keep on writing. nice description of the mom. :]

yay i really liked it...intense! yeah i like the whole family idea XD and yeah...reese's mum is an anla ** lol XD al for now

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PLEASE WRITE MORE! THIS IS AMAZING! I HOPE DAVE AND REESE GET TOGETHER SOON... I THINK THAT WOULD WORK OUT. HOW OLD ARE YOU?!

Wow...that chapter was scary! But good. :)

Why is she so mad at Dave all the time? she needs to chill...he just likes her. God! Anyway, good chapter!

Btw- Your Guardian Angel is such a good song!

Dave is such a sweetie! But the chances of having a little garden that pretty in the back of the school is totally not possible...it's okay though. This is fiction! :) Ha ha, anyway, good chapter!

"Because Marissa Lake is never easily scared." That was a good last line. :) Great chapter!

Wow...that girl was mean! But go Marissa! YAY!

So Dave is the dark haired dude who was hitting on her? You didn't really clarify that...you just started using his name right away. Anyway, good chapter. :)

Wow...that dark haired guy is going to be a major part of the story, isn't he? :) Good chapter.

This is certainly an interesting first chapter...what happens at SHS? Ohh...I'm curious!