Wow, this is really intriguing. I can't wait to find out what happens when he goes to the club. I really enjoy the unusual names as well, it gives it a nice twist. :)

-PIAB

I hope you mean to continue this. It's not really something I understand anymore, this updating phenomena, especially when it comes to fiction... but you've definitely piqued some interest with the backstory and the hints dropped for how this will progress so... why not?

nice, little chapter. honestly, i liked it better then the first one...it was easyer to read - but yes, considerably shorter.

i'd ask you to update soon, but...like that's going to happen!

NU U DID NOT JUST START ANOTHER STORY! ...well, who am i to talk!

xD

its interesting, i can't say i like it, but it's not bad, none the least.