Haha... funny. It's funny because of the word 'blue'. Unfortunately, blue doesn't look good in me.

Hehehe. Actually first I thought Louis was girl... and then I re-read it properly and found out he was a boy! I'm so clumsy.


[Update all your other stories... please... or else you DIE! Just joking! But please update.]

Well, I was going to sign in and leave a review on this, but I lost my password.
This is, at the moment, probably my favorite piece on Fictionpress (of the ones that I have read, that is).
I am not entirely sure why I like it as much as I do, though I think it has something to do with the fact that I take a particular liking to strange characters.
Wonderful job!
~C

haha, kinda love this. methinks Alley has some major issues. And Louis amuses me a lot.

I'm going to go check your livejournal to see if there's any explanation for this, lmao. I read the first paragraph and was fully like 'make a note to tell her she repeats herself about blue looking good on her' and 'huh, blatent self description' and then I read on. I actually have nothing to say on this since I'm sure you know already, lol.