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animegirl214 2009-11-16 . chapter 1
ah! its like.. there's no ending to this!! are they getting married or not?! ;P haha
thanks for this oneshot though! it was REALLY cute.
*sigh*
i dont even rememebr my life 5 years ago, dont kno how i'll remember my childhood :P
ir0nna 2009-10-19 . chapter 1
i cried.
enough said.
lolz^^ 2009-10-09 . chapter 1
OMG! This story is so amazing that no words can describe how awesome it is! I read your other stories too but I am to lazy to review them until now that I've read this. I would have cried during the story but people were surrounding me and that would have been embrassing...But I had to hold in my tears and blink a lot xD And if they weren't here I would have started crying like a baby :D Well anyways, I was wondering if you can continue it because I want to see if she forgave him or not. I hope you can, and great story again. Well can't wait til you write other stories :) I may or may not review since I'm such a lazy ass person xD Well keep up the good work! Bye!
-JosephinaL
MysterySilence 2009-09-02 . chapter 1
My gosh...sad but romantic. I loved it! First story I have ever read on FictionPress that mdae me cry.
putrisha 2009-08-27 . chapter 1
just great. crying reading another one-shot that really...wow.
to her happy place...does it means she went to their happy place?
i just wanna say i freakin LOVE this one-shot. like their childhood, it seems so sweet, so pure, and like it could really happen. no it's not one of those cheesy childhood friends-turned-lovers. the letters..literally made me cry. it's just so cute, so warm, so romantic. it's cute how as he got older, his writing got more developed. i hope she can accept him and live a happily ever after ending..
CharlotteBradhadair 2009-08-13 . chapter 1
i felt so bad for him and her but more for him though- it was tsill really sweet though
charlotte
anon. 2009-07-21 . chapter 1
omg made me cry a bunch D;
really sad story
your an amazing writer!:D
ithinkyourgay 2009-07-19 . chapter 1
I LOVE THIS STORY.
especially wen they are little kids.
i reckon it wud be better if u wrote wat her decision was in the end.
to me the story doesnt feel complete even tho she wud probably get with him
Shut Up and Smile 2009-06-20 . chapter 1
aw
Sara 2009-06-17 . chapter 1
Hey, I am really impressed. Very very original and interesting as well. You have a talent on putting your mind into a young one, and describe things as a child would. Marvellously written. I love it...
Phemonoe 2009-06-15 . chapter 1
Eh! THAT'S IT?! Are you insane?! I need more!

But that was SO cute :) Don't u wish real life was like that...? I know I do.
Papa'sGirl 2009-06-04 . chapter 1
I never really had a thing for cliches but this story convinced me otherwise. I mean, the whole 'childhood best friend' plot is so totally cliche but the way you write the story it doesn't sound corny or cheesy at all--instead you made it romantic! Everything would have been perfect if only the story had a happy ending... -_- *sighs*

p.s. Even though the ending was VERY disappointing, I'm still giving a DOUBLE THUMBS UP 4 touching love story! >_
dark jam 2009-05-18 . chapter 1
Oh my God, I loved it so much!!

You know, I was just sitting in front of my computer, eating strawberry Pocky (God, I love my Pocky! Have you ever tried them?) and suddenly my friend im-d me with a link to your story. As I was reading, I actually stopped with the Pocky and cried! Dude, those are two impossible things right there, but you made it happen!! You're seriously awesome, and this story rocked!!

Seriously, under normal circumstances, you wouldn't SEE me abandoning my glorious snack foods. And I don't normally cry for fics. Maybe I'd go "aww, how sweet" and turn to mush, but I DO NOT CRY!

Well, way to go. You have proven me wrong!! Haha, now the coating on my Pocky's all soft coz I left it beside my comp and the heat did some weird things to it. But what I'm saying is, you're an awesome writer and you really touched me.

Points for making me cry, dude!!

You've just got yourself a new fan XD
(Imma girl, by the way :P)
Claes Winterspell 2009-05-18 . chapter 1
Oh my cow... O.O This is the first time I came close to crying when reading. Man, I seriously envy your cheesy, cliched, imaginative mind. Can I steal it so I can be entertained every night? Please? I offer chocolates in exchange!

Awesome work! Keep writing!

-Claes Winterspell

P.S. I hope you dont think me psychotic with the brain thing..! >.< I'm corny; forgive me.
justalilcrazy 2009-04-23 . chapter 1
i'm REALLY late and i'm sorry. :(
it's been forever since i've been here and then i remembered you and your unfairly-awesome stories so i figured you must've posted something up.
LOVED IT. as usual. hate you, though. it's not fair. ;)
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