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yayawhynot89 2009-11-26 . chapter 14
Freakin love this fic. More please
D-Mish 2009-07-15 . chapter 13
I actually like this story! Update it, the characters are so well set up - though slightly cliche.

Update!! :)
swords dragons and diet coke 2009-07-06 . chapter 13
HAHAHA LMAO THIS STORY'S HILARIOUS! LOL "HE'S GONNA DEFILE YOU!" ROFL! i'm looking forward to the next chapter, update soon! :)
notyourbiz 2009-04-27 . chapter 13
What do u mean the juicy stuff wll come next chapter? this chap was da sh*t! lolz It was super funny I was lmao'ing the whole time. Luved it!
Enigmatic Night 2009-04-26 . chapter 13
Haha, good chapter.

Wow where was Heath whilst Jay was at that party? It's buzzy that Jay was there... maybe I just wanted to say buzzy. I like the word buzzy. Buzzy.

Soo Jay knows Dane? Interesting, interesting indeed. Will we see more Abdul? It was so funny that he thought she was 12, haha poor Lana just can't catch a break. Aww.

I can't wait to see more drama, such a drama whore I am.

Yeah.. so you know, update. =D
Enigmatic Night 2009-04-26 . chapter 12
Haha, Dane can be effing hilarious. Well I guess that you're effing hilarious. Funny that.

Anyhoo, great chapter, I thought I'd be mad that Dane's got a girlfriend, but I'm not.. hmmph. Curious. I like Yoona, she IS cool.

Abdul huh, haha. On to the next chapter!
notyourbiz 2009-04-15 . chapter 12
*clap clap clap* Yay that was really super duper awesome! !
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Smile i'm very happy!) *smile


UPDATE REALY SON
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notyourbiz 2009-04-14 . chapter 11
omg i just forgot about Dane lolz but i love him Too! They should run into Heath and then they should get into a fight and then the whole school should find out! Gossip baby! Just sugesstions lol u don't need em' though! UPDATE REALLY SUPER SOON!
Enigmatic Night 2009-04-13 . chapter 11
DANE!
Yes, I know that wasn't my initial reaction to the chapter, because he didn't show up until the chapter was nearly done... but that was my last thought before the chapter ended. Sue me.
Actually don't, because I'm broke. And it wouldn't work, because you can't sue people in New Zealand anyway. That's what ACC's for.

ANYhoo... Argh.. I will give you a short detailed run down about what I'd do if I ever had to deal with someone like HEath.
First I'd cut off his fingers, poke him in the eye with one and then send them all around the world so he couldn't get them back in time to sow em back on.
Ew. Okay so maybe I went a little far.

Dude, I really shouldn't be on FP right now, I have an essay due in two days which I've yet to begin writing. Whoops. But I had to read this chap when I saw that it was updated.
Why so short? lol

But yay Dane, I don't hate Dane either. Which is more than I can say for all the other male characters in your story right now. lol just kidding, but Dane's cool.

Until next time amiga.
Enigmatic Night 2009-04-04 . chapter 10
Ew that Jimmy dude in her class is CREPY. lol

Okay. Damn I'm holding out for some Jay time, :/ lol
I just want to know what's going on there you've been focussing a lot on Heath.
Who I still hate. And hate is a strong word =P

Aight, I await the next update with hopeful somethings. Very eloquent. ;)
And I want more about her fam-bam!
Wow listen to me, and list of demands haha.
I mean, when you're inclined to.

All at your leisure. haha. Mistaktes-smishtakes.

Shennanigans.
notyourbiz 2009-04-04 . chapter 10
what r u talking about? I loved it! Yes i would like more now. So if you'd just update please please please and ur an awesome writer!
Faery Queene 2009-04-02 . chapter 10
Hey! I wanted more Maxie, Jun and Lana's mother (name?) action. Sigh, school. I hope the next chapter will not focus too much on school and more the home life. I'm sick of Heath. Not as good of a chapter, mistakes a-plenty. I hope you get your inspiration back. :D
feather in my window 2009-04-02 . chapter 4
story tis well good so far

ronically you wrote i am fail n you a/n about not making mistakes XD
Christene 2009-03-05 . chapter 9
I absolutely loved this chapter! It's really refreshing and inspiring to read your work =] I can't wait until the next chapter comes up, I hope it doesn't take as long as this one. I really loved this, When you finish this should totally get published. I'd buy this book no matter how much it costs! It's really that good!
notyourbiz 2009-02-25 . chapter 9
omg that was so excellent pretty please update like really really soon, k?
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