Another wonderful build up and a perfect crescendo and climax, followed by the best ending to a short I've seen my years.

Wow...that was amazing. The story flowed and had just the right amont of scariness to chill me.

Absolutely intriguing! Well descript, flowing, perfected conclusion...
I rarely come across stories so well written. I'm most definitely looking forward to reading more from you! :)

~Unseeing Envisionist~

I really loved the concise-ness of the summary. It made me read it twice, just to see if there was any more information; then, it made me want to read the story. I also liked the end, with the "Ding"s, and how you restated the summary.

Your writing is very good; something that doesn't come across very often on this site.

hey I love you story ,but its a summary lol,because I'm writing a preface ,my story is called sunset by grace1o9...