Brilliant! I loved the style you wrote in. Usually, I get irritated reading stories because the voice that some authors write in is either super annoying or extremely hard to understand - in a bad, nonintellectual way.

So kudos to you! Lovely writing. :]

*Sighs* This is depressing. Even when they met their soul mate, because of the obvious implication of the title, I knew it couldn't end well.

I got really sad right when you started with, "Another thought strikes." And when you wrote, "They are going too fast. I am going to slow." My heart just went kaboom.

Nice use of foreshadowing and repetition.

:)