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Bandgeek111 2008-10-11 . chapter 1
*Sighs* This is depressing. Even when they met their soul mate, because of the obvious implication of the title, I knew it couldn't end well.

I got really sad right when you started with, "Another thought strikes." And when you wrote, "They are going too fast. I am going to slow." My heart just went kaboom.

Nice use of foreshadowing and repetition.

:)
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