I love this story
Update as soon as you can, I know your laptop broke but do update soon
I bet dramas gonna happen now that the ex is comming
oh and I love Rory reminds me of my best friend =D
Keep on writin'

honestly this story is so good :)
keep up the great work and see the computer crash as just another small setback ;) but seriously if this is your first story.. wow..

:)

OMG I LOVED IT WOW THIS IS A GREAT STORY I REALLY HOPE YOU WRITE MORE SOON!!

UWAH~ I love this story...

I basically couldn't spot ANY mistakes..! It was immaculate!~ ^_^ All your characters are fab~ I like Rory, although he hasn't been a really important character. Ahaha... Rose... she's funny. One minute she's obsessed with Jariden!

Jariden: sounds so cool... :D:D:D Love him to death, great job with describing him! Ahhaa... I love his smart quirky quick comeback and responses! They are the funniest.

Bailey: Love her as well. I can't wait to see them as an official couple! They, in my mind, make the perfect pair and look that way as well. She is so in love with Jariden.

Oh, and I like Jariden's name. Really unique!

Good, fantastice, wonderful job! Can't wiat to read the next chapter! I was so sad that there was no more other chapters... T_T

Coco

what an intriguing story
and a sexy, bad boy step brother?
well can't go wrong there!
i love it so far
its so dark, yet ..not at the same time
and Landon and Rose are my two least favourite characters at the moment
they're...just really annoying
can't wait for the next chapter

izzie

this story is really good it has so much depth, bailey has a life that doesn't revolve around jariden which is awesome, the other characters and there problems make this story real.

omg i fell in love with this freaking story.
it's amazing.
now i want my personal jariden.
lol.
i love it;

hope he is telling the truth!

I need more! That was soo good...update soon!! ~Angela

I'm so happy to see you updated, and will be even more if the next update is soon. I liked this chapter, it's got some funny things on it. Raquel is overreacting and Rose is annoying. And, at one paragraph, you put both Raquel's and Rory's (I guess) lines together, what felt a little confusing.
Please, update soon!

Oh yay! Me likies this story! Rory seems like a good guy but how did he break Raquel's heart? By breaking it off with her as soon as he had to go to college cos he didn't think a long distance relationship would work?

Can't wait till next chappie!

I LOVE THIS STORY!@!

God, this is so damn GOOD!! :D Please update soon.

plz update soon i love your story.plz dont be like those people who sudduly stops updateing their storys for like more then a year then sudduly come back expecting to find all their reviewers waiting for them after a long time has past.people who stop updateing for a long time useaully find when they get to updateing again that their once dally reviewers have stop reviewing.no longer interseded(im a bad speller)in the story the reviewer would end up being a fan of someones else work.

*pines for more* i love your characters! i can't wait to see how rory and...(well, everybody, actually) interact!